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Keneta |
Posted - September 12 2002 : 9:00:59 PM Let's all post poetry we've written involving LOTM! Here's my first attempt:
'World On Fire' (Cora's Poem)
The world is on fire, And still I think of you, The one who brought me through The wilderness. Surrounded by noise and enemies And the naked confusion Of life, I touch your face and find The calmness my own Soul lacks, The strength my own Heart shares. As the water that flows Over the rocks, The stream that courses Through the land, So is my love for you. Though the earth burns With the greediness of mankind, Still I think of you. The snake slithers in the shadows With silent intent, And still I think of you. The world is on fire, And still I think of you.
Keneta 8-16-02
Keneta "Never reveal your name. Never turn your back. Never surrender your heart." -The Saint |
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rydergrl |
Posted - April 12 2004 : 6:42:52 PM quote: Originally posted by Keneta
'Uncas' 'O, proud warrior, Man of silent dignity, Do you touch the stars With your soul or Encompass them With your heart? When the world Seems to fold beneath Your feet and those Who don't understand The color of your spirit Turn their backs to you, Your eyes are not silent, Your strength Does not flee. You are the mountain, The rock of your people, And when you die For another, Offering your soul To the Great Spirit With no thought Of the pain, We will honor you With dignity born Upon the wind. -Keneta 9-22-02
Keneta "Never reveal your name. Never turn your back. Never surrender your heart." -The Saint
I had never read this until today. It is beautiful and truly captures the spirit of Uncas. |
Keneta |
Posted - September 23 2002 : 06:38:59 AM 'Uncas' 'O, proud warrior, Man of silent dignity, Do you touch the stars With your soul or Encompass them With your heart? When the world Seems to fold beneath Your feet and those Who don't understand The color of your spirit Turn their backs to you, Your eyes are not silent, Your strength Does not flee. You are the mountain, The rock of your people, And when you die For another, Offering your soul To the Great Spirit With no thought Of the pain, We will honor you With dignity born Upon the wind. -Keneta 9-22-02
Keneta "Never reveal your name. Never turn your back. Never surrender your heart." -The Saint |
Ongewasgone |
Posted - September 20 2002 : 3:30:17 PM Even writing a houndred pages about Cora's character, I could never tell enought to feel the same things I do reading this poetry..God! That's what I'd like to study during my English Literature lessons!!
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Christie |
Posted - September 15 2002 : 6:59:16 PM Keneta, That's beautiful! Your seniments perfectly match Cora's heart. I know there are some very creative people on this board so I hope more people post their own poetry. Any attempts I make would sound like a 4th grader since I always seem to rhyme. Again, a beautiful poem.
Christie
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